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Post by //CJ on Jan 22, 2007 4:14:36 GMT 10
1. The World Comes Tumbling Down, Down, Down
Its funny, I remember the first time I set foot in Salem Massachusetts, it was a bleak dreary day and I remember thinking that I hated it and that I wanted so badly to go back to Australia, where it was warm and I had lots of friends, whereas here in Salem I had none apart from my twin sister Callie. Now I don’t think I’d leave the place for anything, not even a life supply of chocolate. Everything had so far turned out alright, I had the two bestest friends anyone could ever have, Honey and Nevaeh, my best internet friend had moved here to Salem because her mom had gotten transferred, our biological mom Heidi lives here in the old Ropes Mansion with her boyfriend Miles and our adorable little half sister Carrie, and I had everything a girl could dream of, I was pretty, almost beautiful, my skin was flawless and I had a wardrobe any girl would kill for. Most important of all was my family, my twin sister Callie, my little adorable sister Carrie and my dad, well he was not home all that much but when he was, we were a happy little family. But I had a feeling that was all going to fall apart soon. And I was right.
^^^^^^Well thats the intro to one of my NaNoWriMo Stories, Finding Your Way, hope you all liked
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Post by x.Emelie.x on Jan 22, 2007 4:46:17 GMT 10
I love it, you should post some more
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Post by //CJ on Jan 22, 2007 4:51:36 GMT 10
I will but the first chapter is like 5,000 words so It might have to be split up a bit lol
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Post by x.Emelie.x on Jan 22, 2007 5:02:25 GMT 10
okay good plan, lol.
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Post by //CJ on Jan 22, 2007 16:34:36 GMT 10
A few days later Drew and Callie were lounging around in the huge living room reading and writing when their father Glen came rushing in, a bright smile lighting up his face. “I’m engaged!” he practically shouted. Callie’s jaw dropped open. Drew’s face went void of emotion. “Well…?” Glen asked after no one said anything. “That’s- That’s great dad” Drew managed to choke out and faked a happy face. “To Who?” Callie asked rudely not even trying to make an effort to be happy. “To my girlfriend- fiancée now- Holly, she’s so pretty and her kids are so nice” Glen said dreamily. “Kids?” Drew said weakly, already dreading it. “Yes, isn’t it great?” Glen said enthusiastically. “Uhh… yeah sure dad…” Drew said trying to maintain the happy face. However Callie’s was pissed off as hell. “How the hell could you just get engaged without telling us? Your daughters! Shouldn’t that have some priority before you and your skank decide to go off and get married?” She yelled. “Callie…” Glen sighed. “No dad, I don’t want to hear it” She said angrily and stomped out the front door. Drew glanced from the front door to her father and then she made a decision and ran out after her sister shouting “Callie!”
Callie ran into Underworld, the only underage club in all of Salem. “Hey Callie! Over here” Callie heard her friend Shay call from over in the corner. She headed over to the table and sat down. “Hey guys what’s up?” She asked them. “Nothing, but you seem pissed, I mean you ran in here and if looks could kill I’d make myself blind” her other friend Rachel said. “Well my dads getting married” Callie said feeling the anger fizzle out of her. “To a woman?” Shay asked quizzically. “Duh, yes to a women! And worse, she has kids!” Callie groaned. “Ugh that sucks! Have you ever met her?” Rachel asked. “No! and that’s worse! What am I supposed to expect?” Callie asked and she put her head in her hands. “Just stay positive” a voice from behind her said. She turned around. “Hey Sam” she said and she moved her chair so he could get one and put it next to her. “Hey” he said and he put an arm around her. “So what are you lovely ladies doing tonight?” he asked. “I’m going to my aunts” Shay said “and I’m going on a date with James” Rachel said. “Me, nothing” Callie said. “Well then how would you like to come over to my place and scoff down chocolate and Sprite and talk about how miserable our lives are” Sam offered. “Yeah that would be great, at what time?” Callie asked. “How about seven?” he asked. “Yeah, that would be great” Callie said, then reached for Sam’s hand under the table.
Suddenly Rachel’s mobile phone rang. She looked at the caller ID and instantly pressed the “call end” button. “Who was that?” Sam asked. “It was her own personal stalker” Shay laughed. “She has a stalker?” Sam asked. “Yeah, about a year back she rejected a dude named Dean and now he wont stop calling her and sending her gifts” Callie explained. “How cute” Sam said. “Uhh… no! I have a boyfriend, I don’t need some crazy stalker dude sending me stuff” Rachel complained. “But isn’t it nice to have someone practically worshiping the ground you walk on nice?” Drew asked as she came in and sat down next to her Rachel. “Hey, I’d worship the ground you walk on any day” Evan, the cash register guy and Drew’s almost boyfriend said as he pulled up a chair next to Drew. “Hiya handsome” Shay said jokingly. “Heh that’s probably what Drew’s thinking now… except in different words” Callie teased. “and in much more graphic ways” added Shay and then everyone apart from Drew burst out laughing. “You guys are sooo evil!” Drew muttered as she went bright red. “Oh come on Drew, we all know it’s true!” Callie said loudly. “We all know whats true?” Honey said as she came over and pulled up a seat beside Evan. “That Drew likes to perve on Evan while he’s working” Callie said. “I- DO- NOT!” Drew almost shouted, her cheeks growing redder than any one ever thought possible. “Yes you do, the way you stare at his backside is like a little kid staring at the puppies in a pet shop window” Honey laughed. “What is it, pick on Drew day?” complained Drew. “Yeah lay off, not that I’m not flattered by her staring at me” Evan said, grinning like a boy on his birthday. “Ooh does Lover boy have a little crush on Drew too?” teased Jordan coming over from the table next to them and pulling up a chair beside Honey. “You bet he does” Evan said making Drew go redder. “Aww see he admits it, why cant you?” Callie asked. “Well okay… I err…” Drew tried. “Yeeess??” Callie said. “Gotta go” Drew said and proceeded to jump up and run off with stares following her. “Jeeze that girl is like allergic to any form of love” observed Jordan. “I’m gonna go after her okay? Tell everyone I’m on my break” Evan said and he ran out after her.
“Drew, hey Drew, wait up!” he yelled after her. Drew stopped running and turned around. She looked a little lost. “Happy birthday for tomorrow” he said as he reached her and pulled out a little jewelry box out of his pocket. “You better not be proposing to me mister” she scolded jokingly. “Don’t worry, I’m not proposing, so open the box” Evan said.
Drew opened up the box to reveal the beautiful ring and matching bracelet she had seen in the shop window the other day. She gasped and threw her arms around Evan. “Evan, you are just the… mostsweetestmantoeverwalktheplanet” Drew said the last bit really fast. “Err what was that?” Evan asked, confused. “You are the sweetest man to ever walk the planet” Drew said, going red again. “Aww thanks Drew, but I’m not, you deserved something really special for your sweet sixteen and…” he trailed off then, not knowing what to say, but was enveloped into another hug so it didn’t matter anyway.
“This is nice…” Drew murmured. Suddenly a small beeping filled the air and Evan pulled away. “My breaks over, I gotta go… But I’ll see you tonight, I’ll pick you up at about seven thirty?” he asked. “Seven thirty sounds great” she said. He squeezed her hand one more time before turning around and going back into Underworld. Drew sighed dreamily as she clutched the box to her chest.
Later that day, when Drew had just arrived home she found a storm brewing up between her sister and her father. “Okay guys, whats up?” She sighed having a feeling that the answer was going to put a damper on her mood. “He wants us to have dinner with her tonight at seven” Callie said emphasizing the “her” bit. “Why is that such a… Oh, dad, tonight yeah, not so good for me either, how about we reschedule for Sunday, I’ll cook” Drew offered. Glen smiled, happy to have at least one of his daughters trying to make this work. “Sure, maybe you could make that famous roast you do and chocolate ice-cream for desert?” he asked. “Sure, Haylee- Halle - Holly isn’t allergic to anything right?” Drew asked squirming under her sister’s glare. “No, no, thank you for making an effort Drew I really appreciate it” Glen said and he jumped up and hurried upstairs to make a phone call.
“What?” Drew asked her sister who looked mightily pissed at her. “You’re actually trying to make an effort for that skank?” Callie asked angrily. “Noooo I am trying to get us time to go on our dates tonight” Drew said as if it were the mot obvious thing in the world. “Oh. OH. Wait you have a date?” Callie asked. “Yup well sort of” Drew said. “Wait how do you mean ‘Sort of’ Define ‘Sort of’” Callie said. “Well he said he’d pick me up at seven thirty” Drew said. A huge grin spread across Callie’s face.
“Oh my god, yay! Drew’s going on a date! Her first date!” Callie yelled. “Oh so make the world think of me as an even bigger loser why don’t ya” Drew muttered. “That’s the plan!” Callie smirked. Drew shook her head incredulously while rolling her eyes. “Callista Andrews, you are something else” Drew stated. “And by something else you mean incredibly beautiful kind and unselfish?” Callie asked while batting her eyelashes. “No, by something else I mean you are incredibly evil” Drew laughed.
That night at about eight o’clock Drew was pacing the foyer. It was never like Evan to be late for anything. Horrible thoughts raced through her mind about what might have happened to him.
She paced a little more and when she checked her watch again it was eight fifty. He was an hour and twenty minutes late. She decided to call his house to see what was keeping him. Even as she dialed his home phone number she had a feeling of dread in her stomach. “Hello?” Evan’s mom Gloria answered. She sounded a little panicked.
“Hi, Gloria is Evan there?” she asked. The woman broke down in tears over the phone. “No… he was in an accident, oh it was horrible, the hospital called at seven fifty… I wanted to go but Harold said that he needed someone to look after Underworld” Gloria blubbered. Drew started to feel a little numb. Evan, in an accident… “What hospital is he at?” Drew asked panicking. “North Shore, please will you go and check up on him and then ring me?” Gloria asked. “Of course Gloria, I’ll go right now” Drew said and then proceeded to hang up the phone.
She stared into space for a minute then snapped out of it and hurriedly wrote a not explaining where she was and that she didn’t know when she would be back. Not bothering to change she ran out the front door and locked it and then quickly ran down the front steps and through the gardens until she went crashing down on the grass.
“Damn High heels!” Drew shouted and she pulled them off and then stood up and started to run again, ignoring the pain shooting up her right leg and the shouts of her dad as he drove up the driveway.
She made it to the hospital fifteen minutes later gasping for breath. She regained her composure and put her high heels back on before stepping into the waiting room. Evan’s little sister and older brother were in there waiting. “Hi…” She whispered to them as she sat down.
“Hey Drew” Jainee said glumly. That was the creepy thing about Evan’s family, they always could tell Drew and Callie apart and even their own dad couldn’t do that. “What’s happening?” she asked. “Evan was in a car accident, they say he may never wake up” Jainee said and Drew let out a little gasp as her shields began to crack and she let the emotion seep in. Michael, Evans dad, walked out of a room down a narrow hallway and made his way over to where Drew, Jainee and Jake were sitting. “The doctor says he can have visitors now so you can go in if you want” Michael offered trying to smile. “Umm… I’d like to go last if that’s okay?” Drew asked. “Sure…” Michael said and they both sat in awkward silence as Jainee and Jake went into Evan’s room. A few minutes passed and then Jainee and Jake came out and then nodded to Drew signaling that she could go in now.
Drew gently pushed the door open to Evans room. It was a standard hospital room, bed, chairs, annoying beeping machine that is extremely important, Wire thingers that they hook up to your arm/hand. Drew didn’t care about any of this; she only cared about the person who was lying in the hospital bed, Evan. She pulled a chair over beside his bead and sat down and rested her head on the edge of the mattress and began to talk:
“Hey Evan, I know you can hear me in there and I just wanted to tell you I… well I… never mind that can wait… If- When you wake up I will make this up to you I promise, I will… I hope you’ll forgive me for not admitting that I like you… I guess I’m not good at showing emotion much. Evan I know that you know that everybody knows I don’t believe in god… but if there is a god out there I swear with all my heart that I’ll be good, I’ll go to church, I’ll become a nun, I will go to confession, I will put money in the charity boxes and I’ll stop wasting so much water and so much paper if only you would wake up… I don’t know if you understand this Evan, because I don’t, I feel lost and confused and my head is spinning and I know that this can only be one thing, love. So I swear all of the things I already said and I swear never to hide anything from you…”
At that point Drew looked up when she heard a cough coming from the doorway. “Hey Drew, the doctors said someone could stay in here the night but I cant because I have to look after the kids, so would you?” Michael asked hopefully. “Of course” Drew said while nodding. “Good, shall I have the nurses bring in a mini couch? Or are you happy to sleep on the chair?” he asked. “I’m happy with the chair, thanks” Drew sighed. “Okay, if you’re sure?” Michael checked one more time with her and when she shook her head he closed the door. She started talking again.
“Hey Evan, I’m staying in here the night so when you wake up I’ll be here and you wont feel so confused, okay? I’m right here, I’m not leaving” Drew finished and gently stroked his right hand which was the one closest to her. She leaned her head down on his hand and slowly drifted off to sleep.
A few hours later Drew awoke to a hand gently stroking her head. “Hi…” A quiet voice whispered. Evan! He was awake! “Evan!” she gasped and lifted up her head and threw her arms around him. He hugged her tightly back. “Hey I heard what you said earlier… You don’t have to become a Nun or do any of those other things you said, I love you just the way you are” He said. Drew smiled and gently let go of him. “Hey! I was enjoying that!” protested Evan. “I bet you were” Drew smirked slightly. “Well its 3am on the rocket clock so how about we get some more sleep ‘cause I’m tired” Evan said with a yawn. “Oh you lazy man! You already slept like seven and a half hours!” Drew joked. “But I guess this isn’t the time for joking is it?” she added glumly. “Not really” Evan agreed. Drew yawned as she felt sleep trying to push her back down into the realms of fantasy. “Who’s tired now?” Evan teased. “I am” Drew yawned again and then let herself fall asleep after Evan closed his eyes.
Drew was spinning around. The colors were blurred because she was spinning so fast. The only thing she could make out was an ice sculpture which was right next to her. The way the sun was shining at it made it look magical and mysterious and oddly beautiful. Her heart was beating so loud that she was sure people on the other side of the city could hear it. She suddenly stopped spinning and let herself fall backwards onto the ground. Everything around her stopped fuzzing and blurring and started to become clear…
Drew woke up to a gentle tapping on her head. “Huh?” she asked confusedly. “Drew, Evan’s waking up!” whispered an excited voice of Jainee. “Huh? I know. Last night…” Drew trailed off. Did that even happen? “What do you mean last night?” Jake asked. “I woke up and he was awake… was about 3am… I think…” Drew trailed off again. Jainee smiled.
“Drew?” mumbled Evan as he woke up. “I’m here” she said and she grabbed his hand. “Hey, buddy how ya doing?” asked Michael. “I’m good dad, how are you two?” he asked Jainee and Jake. Drew bit her lip and started to move out the door sensing a family moment going on.
“No, Drew stay. You’re just as much family as us and besides you could end up being his future wife so you’re welcome to stay” Michael said. Drew blushed. “No, I gotta make a phone call anyway, Callie and my dad will be worried” explained Drew. “You didn’t tell them you were coming?” asked Michael. “I left them a note cause no one else was home” Drew explained. “Oh. Okay, go ahead, we don’t want you getting in trouble” Evan said. Drew smiled at him and left the room.
Drew made her way over to a coffee machine. She grimaced at the thought of it but she needed caffeine badly and it was the only thing she could see that was relatively close to a pay phone. She pinched her nose and tried not to taste the coffee as she tipped it into her mouth.
She made a face as she ran to the nearest drink machine and quickly put in some money and pressed the button for the water. “Coffee is so evil!” she gasped as she finally got the horrible taste out of her mouth. Oh well at least she had woken up completely. She sighed and made her way over to the pay phone and slid in two dollars and then dialed her house number.
“Hello, Andrews Residence” a female said on the other end. It was not Callie she knew that, Callie sounded exactly like herself. “Hi… This is Drew… Can I speak to my sister Callie please?” Drew requested. “Sure, Callie! Phone!” the female yelled out. “I got the other line you can hang up now” Callie shouted down to the other person.
“Hey, Callie?” Drew asked. “Yeah?” Callie answered. “Who the hell was that who answered the phone?” Drew asked. “Oh. That was Holly. Dad’s fiancé” Callie answered. “Oh. Hey, tell dad that I might not be home tonight or for the rest of the day, I’ll most likely be spending it here at the hospital with Evan” Drew requested.
“Sure, but you gotta come home for an hour at least, its our Sweet Sixteen, it only comes once” Callie said. “Look Callie, I don’t know, can we postpone the party till next week?” Drew asked.
“Sure Drew, but then its definitely next week, no more postponing no matter how many accidents occur” Callie said. “Yeah, definitely next week” Drew said. “So how is Evan anyway?” Callie asked. “I’m not sure, but he woke up at least” Drew said. “So… are you two getting married anytime soon?” Callie asked cheekily.
“Huh? No, what? Why do you ask?” asked Drew, confused. “Well I saw a jewelry box sitting on your bed” Callie said. “Oh. He got me a ring. And a bracelet. You can even go look but if you break them I will kill you Callie” Drew said seriously. “Yay! Thanks Drew! Bye bye!” Callie squealed into the phone. “Bye!” Drew said and then hung up the phone and made her way back to Evan’s room.
“Coffee is so evil tasting” Drew said as she entered Evan’s room to find that his family had left. Evan smiled at her from the bed. “Of course it is, but at least it wakes you up” he said. “Happy Birthday by the way” Evan said as she sat down in the chair beside the bed. “Thanks, I’m spending the day here, if that’s okay with you?” Drew asked.
“No, I’m fine really, you should go out and have fun, it’s your sweet sixteenth birthday it only comes once” Evan said. “Funny, that’s what Callie said, and besides I don’t wanna go out and party without you” Drew said. “Well, if you’re sure?” Evan checked. “Yeah, I’m sure, I don’t wanna go out and party without you” Drew repeated.
“Okay, but just a warning, its probably going to be a very, very, very boring day, there’s not much to do” Evan warned. “That’s okay, We can tell stories or something. Or play 20 questions. And I can get Callie to bring down some stuff to do” suggested Drew. “That sounds great Drew” Evan agreed. “So how about Truth or Dare for now?” Drew offered. “Sure, can I go first?” Evan asked in reply. “Yup, ask away” Drew said.
“Truth, Dare, Double Dare, Torture, Kiss or Promise?” Evan asked hoping she would pick truth, promise or dare and not torture or kiss. “Truth” Drew replied. “Is it true what you said about you loving me?” he asked. “It’s true” Drew said. Evan smiled at her. “Okay, my turn, Truth, Dare, Double Dare, Torture, Kiss or Promise?” Drew asked. “Promise” Evan said. “Do you promise that even if we don’t work out we will always stay friends?” Drew asked. “Always” Evan said and he slid his hand over hers and she smiled at him.
Callie sat down at the dining table and sighed. “A penny for your thoughts” came a voice form the doorway. Callie looked up sharply. “Mom!” She squealed and ran over to Heidi and threw her arms around her. “Hey, how’s my little girl?” Heidi asked teasingly. “Mooom! I’m sixteen; I’m not little any more!!” Callie protested. “No matter how old you are, you and Drew will always be my little girls” smiled Heidi. “Speaking of Drew, where is the little devil?” questioned Heidi. “Oh mom, her kind of boyfriend is in hospital and Drew isn’t coming home tonight” Callie explained.
“Drew has a boyfriend? Why doesn’t anybody tell me these things?” asked Heidi. “Mom, it just happened yesterday, anyway I was going to go over there in about half and hour to bring some stuff over because hospitals are boring” Callie said.
“That’s a good idea; I might go over there with you to give Drew her present, and I’m sure Carrie would love to see her” Heidi said. “Good idea about the presents, Drew’s bedroom is stuffed with them” laughed Callie. “Alrighty then, let’s go” Heidi said and they proceeded to gather Drew’s presents up from her room and pack them into the back of the car with some board games and stuff packed in for extra.
Drew watched while the nurse rolled a fresh bandage on one of Evan’s wound. Both of them were currently nagging to go outside. “Pleeeeaseeee! It’s my sixteenth birthday today, pleeeeaseeee let us go outside as a birthday present” whined Drew.
The nurse sighed, evidently fed up with their whining. “Oh alright! Just let me check with Dr Keasing” sighed the nurse. “Thaaankkk youuu” Drew said in that same whiny voice just to piss the nurse off.
A few minutes later the nurse came back with a wheel chair. “Dr Keasing said you can go out, but only if you bring a jacket and you have to stay in the wheel chair” the nurse said. “Yay!!!” squealed Drew in a childish voice. “Now, Mr. Kensington, time to get you in this contraption” the nurse said.
After a few minutes of struggling Evan was finally out of the bed and into the wheel chair. “Off you go, and be back in at least an hr, neither of you have eaten yet and we should get some food in you” the nurse said and then shooed them outside.
Drew pushed Evan in the wheelchair around the hospital gardens. She was singing a song by Kate Miller Heidke, Out and In. People were staring at her but she was having a good time so she just dismissed the stares. With a smile she bent down and picked up a stray rose which must have fallen out of someone’s bouquet of roses. She passed it Evan. “Aren’t I the one supposed to be getting you flowers?” he asked. “You have plenty of time for that when you get better” assured Drew.
They were suddenly interrupted by someone yelling “Drew-ie Bluey Huey Duey shoey, Bubblegum Bluie!” “Oh god” groaned Drew. “I brought presents!!” squealed Callie, not noticing the dirty looks the old people were giving her. “Yay! Pressies! Where are they?” asked Drew. “In Evans room” Callie said and practically dragged them back to the hospital room.
Waiting inside the hospital room for them was one very excited child (Carrie), one very excited mother (Heidi) and a truck load of presents. After pushing Evan back into bed they assembled around the presents. “Which one should I open first?” Drew asked, feeling lost looking at all the presents.
“Ooh! Open mine!” Heidi said and pushed a small box towards Drew. She ripped open the packaging and let out a squeal of delight. “Oh my god! Oh my god! You got me Bones season 1. Oh my god” Drew said excitedly.
Heidi beamed at her, happy that she had chosen the right present. “Okay, open mine now!” Callie urged. Drew ripped off the wrapping to the present and five books fell out, four of the ones she’d always wanted and then a new Bones book. “Thank you so much!” she said to her mom and her sister. “That’s okay, now open up everything!” Heidi said excitedly.
About an hour later Drew, Heidi, Callie and Carrie were lying in wrapping paper on the floor. “You guys I hope you know this is totally unfair, I am stuck here in the bed while you are doing god knows what on the floor” Evan complained.
“Would you rather me come and it’s up there on the bed with you?” Drew said, already getting up and sitting on the bed after she had lowered it down. “Drew and Evan sitting in the tree, K I S S I N G, first comes love, then comes marriage, then comes Drew with a baby carriage!” chorused Callie, Heidi and Carrie from the floor.
“Jeeze, Mom I swear you act Carrie’s age sometimes” Drew said in her “Oh I’m so posh” voice. Torrents of giggles came from the floor and beside her Evan was almost choking on his laughter.
Suddenly the door was pushed open and a voice rang out. “Okay I hear laughter, laughing is good” it was the same voice from the phone. The person pushed the door open and stepped through to reveal a woman in her mid thirties with long brown hair and brown doe like eyes and Glen.
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Post by //CJ on Jan 22, 2007 16:35:02 GMT 10
The woman made her way over to the bed. “Hi, I’m Holly” she started but was immediately cut off by a squeal. “Oh my god! Holly Adams! Oh my god!” Drew’s almost incoherent babbling continued and she looked just about ready to jump of the bed and glomp her. and that’s when Drew realized that this was the woman her dad was marrying and she immediately shut down completely and stared at her with cold and unfeeling eyes. It wasn’t that she didn’t like Holly, she did. But this was far too complicated. She would be hurting her mom if she started liking Holly. Her sister would feel that she was betraying her. No, she couldn’t get to know Holly; she couldn’t get to like her as a family member. It was all very hard though, she had often dreamed when she was little that Holly would be her mother.
Drew felt Evan squeeze her hand and she squeezed back. She would tell Evan later. And suddenly she let a feeling slip out. “I swear to god if you bring Alyssa over I will not be taken responsible for my mootilating actions” Drew said really fast. “What’s ‘Mootilating’?” Holly asked. Drew instantly clamped down. “Not to be rude, but who in hell are you?” Heidi asked, covering Carrie’s ears at the word ‘Hell’. “I’m Holly, Glen’s fiancé, who are you?” asked Holly.
“I’m Heidi, Glen’s ex-wife. Callie and Drew’s mother.” Heidi said, not even bothering to keep the anger out of her voice. Holly turned to Evan. “Hi, we brought you a card and some chocolate cause the hospital food is really disgusting” Holly said.
Heidi scowled. Evan, seeing that Heidi looked like she was about to kill Glen and Holly said, “Maybe one of you should leave?” “You heard the boy Heidi, maybe you should leave” Glen said. “I am not leaving my children here with that skank face” Heidi shot back.
Drew gasped angrily. “You know what? Maybe you should both leave!” Drew said in one of her Calm-but-deadly voices. “Well you evidently want her to leave so she should go” Heidi said. “How do you know what I want? That’s right you don’t. So leave!” Drew hated herself for yelling at her mother but if she was going to act like this she might as well leave.
“Oh, so you like her better than me! You choose some stranger over your own mother!” shouted Heidi. “Look, you don’t know how it is okay? You haven’t had your parents spilt up when you were five, resulting with your mom moving to Salem and yourself, your sister and your dad moving to Salem too not knowing about their mom moving to the same place and discovering that you have a little sister! And then finding out the day before your sixteenth birthday that your dad is getting married to some woman who has two kids and then finding out your boyfriend was in an accident and in hospital! Alright, you don’t know what its like to be me so just piss off!” shouted Drew and she jumped off the bed and pulled the door open and Heidi and Carrie pushed past Holly and Glen, Callie looked around looking a bit torn and slowly made her way past Holly and Glen and Drew felt a few sharp pains in her heart. Drew shut the door behind her sisters and her mom and went back and sat on the bed. Holly looked a little anxious and confused. “Maybe we should go” Holly said nervously to Glen. “No, stay please” said Drew and she attempted to smile.
“Uhh… okay…” Holly said. Drew attempted another smile. “Well, I guess welcome to the family” Drew said. “Thanks” Holly said, and then her phone rang. “Hello?” Holly said into the phone. After a pause she said “Oh okay, Shay, I’ll be there in a minute” Holly said and then hung up.
“Hey Glen, Shay and Pippa are at the airport now, we gotta go pick them up” Holly said to Glen. “Okay, Drew do you wanna come and meet your new sisters?” Glen asked her. “No thanks, I wanna stay here with Evan” Drew insisted. “Oh come on Drew, go with them and eat something before you faint” Evan said. “I’ll go with you to see them but I am going straight back here” Drew said. “Drew…” Evan said sternly.
“Fine. But after that I am going straight back here okay?” Drew asked. “Fine” they all agreed. “Come on, lets go then” urged Holly. Reluctantly Drew let go of Evan’s hand and leaned down and gave him a hug. “Jeeze Drew, it’s not like you are leaving me forever” teased Evan. “Might as well be forever” mumbled Drew. Evan smiled. “Now go Drew, before I have to get out of this bed and force you to” joked Evan.
^okay so i know this is crapalicious lol and its VERY long
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Post by x.Emelie.x on Jan 22, 2007 18:08:59 GMT 10
I this its great. I told you, you were an awsome writer. Now get off your lazy butt and do some more of this story
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Post by //CJ on Jan 22, 2007 18:24:58 GMT 10
well we are doing the Write Around arent we? so I dont ahve to do nothing until then... well unless you count that HH challenge entry lol
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Post by x.Emelie.x on Jan 22, 2007 18:33:12 GMT 10
Oh come on you were happy about HH, plus if you need help I can help you....I just don't want Rah to get angry at me, lol
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Post by //CJ on Jan 22, 2007 18:37:49 GMT 10
lol hey I got an idea! why dont YOU write my entry lol. jokes. I will get off my butt sometime and do it, maybe 2morrow
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Post by x.Emelie.x on Jan 22, 2007 18:46:43 GMT 10
Okay, and no I will not write it for you, if you hadn't noticed I haven't been writing in a while, lol....but if you need help I can always help....and that Write around sounds cool too....wonder if we can get enough people though...
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Post by //CJ on Jan 22, 2007 18:52:01 GMT 10
yeah...
...and yo usure yo uwont do my entry lol (jokes again)
Anyway I only got 30,027 words for WriYe so I better get writing
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Post by x.Emelie.x on Jan 22, 2007 19:03:52 GMT 10
You do realize that 30k is like way over what you need right now. I mean if you do 30k every month you will have almost 400k in a year
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Post by //CJ on Jan 22, 2007 19:06:16 GMT 10
yeah BUT you ahve 2k more than me... it seems just yesterday I was 4k ahead of YOU
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Post by x.Emelie.x on Jan 22, 2007 19:08:27 GMT 10
haha well De-anne was the one who didn't stop writing thet 2 sister chapters, lol. Other then that I have hardly done any writing....so blame her
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