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Post by xDocMartinx on Aug 17, 2007 1:08:49 GMT 10
I really like writing poems but I'm not very good at it, so I thought I needed a thread to post all my poems on. Here is a poem I have just wrote, I was watching the Grey's Anatomy season 2 finale and I wrote this poem from Alex's POV towards Izzie....I'm such a fan of the Izzie/Alex relationship. Anyway here is the poem... Love To Be Used
You use me You use me as a lifeguard To save your from downing In the salty river you cried so hard.
You use me You use me as a diary You tell me all your secrets All your love life so firey
You use me You use me as a blanket I warm you from the cold real life Your happy little world sank it.
You use me You use me as a teddy A thing to cling and cuddle, To make you feel happy.
I'm not complaining far from it so but sometimes I just wish you would never let me go. Please tell me what you think. Thanks xxx
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Post by x.Emelie.x on Aug 17, 2007 4:22:58 GMT 10
that is really good. I love the feeling of it
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Post by Mir.x on Aug 17, 2007 7:13:35 GMT 10
I love it... lol reminds me of a scence I'm about to put in my fanfic..... I love season to finial i cried lol stupid denny had to go have a stroke and die
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Post by xDocMartinx on Aug 17, 2007 9:11:58 GMT 10
Thanks guys. I hadnt seen the season finale before today and I really tried not to cry but I couldn't help it, it was just sooooo sad, I dunno if I cried more because Denny died or because Doc died (i'm a sucker for animals !) lol. Then it was repeated straight after and i actully had to change the channel and then throw the remote to stop myself from watching it again and crying !!!!
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Post by xDocMartinx on Aug 21, 2007 2:56:33 GMT 10
A Skate (Sawyer and Kate) from Lost poem (Kates POV)
I look at you with desire and lust. But it could be mis-read. As it looks like disgust.
People see you a hard shell of a man. But I see you as someone. Someone who can.
You can be who want, and hide from the pain. From the tears and the sadness. That you contain.
I pretend to reject any attention you give me. But deep down inside I creave you with me.
So I will play charade this yet again Hoping one day you'll know. Just when ?
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Post by xDocMartinx on Aug 21, 2007 2:57:51 GMT 10
Either Izzie and Denny or Shannon and Boone poem.
Pretend I'm Not Sad Pretend It's All Gone 'Cos Sympathy Doesn't Last Long
Pretend There Is Someone; Different And New. But You Know My Heart Can Only See You
But You're Six Feet Under You've Left No Trace But The Permanant Imprint On My Mind Of Your Face
But I'll Go On Yet Another Day Pretending It's Over Pretending I'm Ok
Yet At Night I'll Sneak To Your Grave And My Cries Will Be Masked By The Sound Of The Waves.
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